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Old 08-21-2004, 09:22 PM   #1
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I have seen beneath your pious halo
shining bright,
but so does fool’s gold.
Your wear a lying smile
and the mask of a nurturing soul ,
but you nurture pain
wrapped in arrogant bows of unconcern.

You peek out at the world
afraid they might see
the wolf in disguise
hungry for the young flesh
and baby eyes.
Their innocent tears
makes your heart beat faster,
exhilaration fires the lions.
The beast rises within,
you tear them with your fangs
forged from a demented mind.

Beware I know that smile.
Beware I know that face.
Beware I see into your dark space,
empty, void of any grace.
Beware I see the demon.
Beware I am not afraid.
Be wary and fade
into the penumbra of
ineffective blackness
for we see you
and in this place of shadows,
we see clearly
the darkness in you.

The halo becomes a cloud
and fools gold isn’t worth a dime
when everyone knows
what evil you have designed
for the innocent victim
whose only sin is
having others like you
attack their fragile minds.

Beware I see you.
Beware I know that smile.
Beware I know that face.
Beware I see into your dark space,
empty, void of any grace.
Beware I see the demon.
Beware I am not afraid.
Be wary and fade
away.

June 13, 2003 iblieve
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Old 08-22-2004, 10:22 AM   #2
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damn baby...this is ominous! I love the tone in this, the warning....powerful piece my love~Dandy
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Old 08-22-2004, 08:26 PM   #3
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Thanks baby, sometimes the things people hide are so clear to me and its my way of pulling off the mask. love ya sweetie
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Old 08-23-2004, 03:01 PM   #4
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I just had to read this again...powerful. I get more out of each read~Dandy
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Old 08-24-2004, 12:53 AM   #5
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Thanks dandy and rinna thank you and yea I'll write one and tell their parent to run their enebriated asses home before you shoot them, lol. iblieve
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excellent.
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Old 09-13-2004, 08:02 PM   #7
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Excellent ,indeed,triple excellent.
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Old 09-16-2004, 02:12 PM   #8
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Thanks hawk and AP, just ranting again but at my age it is expected, lmao iblieve
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Old 09-16-2004, 04:14 PM   #9
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Awesome, Iblieve.... God knows Ive been there.

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Old 09-17-2004, 11:32 PM   #10
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but you nurture pain
wrapped in arrogant bows of unconcern

Damn...I love that line...the images it conjures up....had to read this one again~Dandy
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Old 09-18-2004, 07:48 PM   #11
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I love that line too baby, and I love you so hurry home. iblieve
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Old 09-21-2004, 05:07 PM   #13
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LMAO, but GG this was written as a warning to people who prey on other's emotions and weaknesses. iblieve
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