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Old 01-23-2005, 03:08 AM   #1
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I didn't think I would wake
Remembering you this way
While the earth shaked
And the tide moved away
My eyes held an image
Of us together near
As I held onto a fence
When the tide reappeared
I gave God my last rights
I called for Mom and Dad
And your name out loud
Gasping for air somehow
Then everything went
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Old 01-27-2005, 09:38 AM   #2
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Makes me think of a failed suicide attempt
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