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Mac · 07-24-2005, 10:41 PM

Life goes on as we struggle
in the muck and mire
of a superficial world
with all its shades of gray.

I’ve lived my life
mostly as I please
The smiles and frowns
wrinkle deep.

Over the years,
I fell in a rut or two
stumbled down wrong paths
even been lost
but no matter what
I always survive.

Nadja the Weird · 07-24-2005, 11:52 PM

Very true, Mac. I appreciated and enjoyed the metaphor of this poem! You've got a great sense of life, I think. Good job!

Wylde · 07-25-2005, 05:05 AM

some one once said to me that the only difference between a groove and a rut, is the depth.

kewl poe.

07-24-2005, 10:41 PM	#1
Mac Poet Laureate Join Date: Feb 1999 Location: Over the rainbow Posts: 11,824 Blog Entries: 13	Life’s ruts Life goes on as we struggle in the muck and mire of a superficial world with all its shades of gray. I’ve lived my life mostly as I please The smiles and frowns wrinkle deep. Over the years, I fell in a rut or two stumbled down wrong paths even been lost but no matter what I always survive.

07-25-2005, 05:05 AM	#3
Wylde Member Join Date: May 2001 Location: between my ears Posts: 13,644	some one once said to me that the only difference between a groove and a rut, is the depth. kewl poe. __________________ and did you exchange a walk on part in the war for a lead role in a cage? interview with wylde

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07-24-2005, 11:52 PM	#2
Nadja the Weird honeygirl Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The Ocooch Mountains Posts: 902	Very true, Mac. I appreciated and enjoyed the metaphor of this poem! You've got a great sense of life, I think. Good job!




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